Dear Headmaster, I’m writing to express my idea about our study at school. As a Senior 3 student, we have to stay at school for nine hours to have lessons and spend at least three to four hou
rs doing our homework at home every day. It takes us only an hour to do sports, so we hardly have any time to watch TV. We feel tired because of the pressure of examinations and the high expectations from the parents. I write this letter only to wish that you could have the teachers give us less homework so that we could have enough time to do what we want. In my opinion, the result of the examinations is not so important to us. We teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves. I’m looking forward to your good news. Yours truly, Li Hua
写作攻略 建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人 的建议和忠告。建议信有可能是写给个人， 就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观 点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改 进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信要写出 写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理 由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要 礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、 目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图) 1．After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that … 2．I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter 4.I am writing to exprss my views on… 5 I am writing to share some advice with you 6. It is my pleasureto offer your some advice on how to… 7. I hope you will not mind me writing to suggest that…
? In my opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action. ? If I were you, I would choose to… ? In my opinion, it would be more beneficial if you could… ? I wonder if you have considered the following things. ? Do you think it would be better to…for you?
? 1.I believe you will take my advice into account. ? 2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful. ? 3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. ? 4. All in all, every effort is rewarding. ? 5. I will be happy to see your improvements in this regard. ? 6. As the famous saying goes that practice makes perfect.
Dear Bob, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议) As to , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到 某一方面). In addition, (其他的建议). I’m sure ____(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决 心). I'm looking forward to (表达愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何 才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。 要点：⑴ 参加中文学习班； ⑵ 看中文书刊、电视； ⑶ 学唱中文歌曲； ⑷ 交中国朋友。 注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。 Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese well.____ _____________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua
Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes, Li Hua
Dear ____, You have asked me for my advice about _______, and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following steps:_______（建议的内容） I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good Luck with your____（祝愿） Yours sincerely Li Ming
Dear ____， I am very glad to hear that you want to seek some suggestions about ______in order to______ From my point of view, ______. Also, to you, I highly recommend that _____. On the one hand, ______. On the other hand, ________ . Besides, it is unnecessary for you to _____. Consequently, I believe that ______ . I hope that my opinions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.