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Content(内容) (是否用5句话表达了全文要点) Language(语言) (句子结构及用词是否得当) Coherence(连贯) (是否用恰当的词语来衔接句子)

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? ? ? ? Tense: 按信息顺序呈现出来 Information: 考虑内在的衔接关系 Person: 第三人称 Sentences structure:
S1: (总述)+名字 S2: 产地+历史 S3: 特点1 S4: 特点2 S5: 功效 S1: 同位语 / 定语从句 S2: 非谓语 S3: 简单句 S4: the +比较级… the 比较级… S5: not only…but also… 一般现在时

白茶(中国六大茶类之一) 名字由来:因呈银白色而得名
S1:定语从句 /同位语

? The white tea, which gets its name from its silver-white colour, is regarded as one of the six major Chinese tea types. ? The white tea, one of the six types of the most famous tea in China, gains its name because of/ for its silver-white colour.

主要产地:福建、台湾 历史:最早出现于北宋

S2: 非谓语

Dating back to the Beisong Dynasty, White Tea has a long history and it is mainly grown in Fujian and Taiwan. Grown mainly in Fujian and Taiwan. White Tea has a long history, dating back to the Beisong Dynasty. Firstly found in the Beisong Dynasty, White Tea now is mainly grown in Fujian and Taiwan

形如银针,外形优美;口感甘甜; S3: 简单句
White Tea is famous for its beautiful silverneedle-like shape, its sweet taste and its medical effects. What distinguishes itself is its beautiful silverneedle-like shape and its sweet taste. It wins scores of praises for its beautiful silverneedle-like shape and its sweet taste. It features with beautiful silver-needle-like shape and smooth and comforting taste.

年份越久,功效越好
S4: the +比较级… the 比较级…

The longer it is preserved, the better effect it has.

功效:常饮有益健康,可预防高血压等疾病, 还可辅导治疗牙痛和发烧等
S5: not only…but also…

Drinking White Tea frequently can significantly contribute to our health, preventing us from diseases like high blood pressure as well as helping relieve the pain of toothache and fever.
Not only is it good for health if drunk frequently, but also it can be used in preventing diseases like high blood pressure as well as helping relieve the pain of toothache and fever.

功效:常饮有益健康,可预防高血压等疾病, 还可辅导治疗牙痛和发烧等
S5: not only…but also…

Not only can it protect us against high blood pressure but it also can help relieve the pain of… It can not only prevent us from suffering from…….but it also contributes to ……

White Tea, which gets its name from its silverwhite color, is regarded as one of the six major Chinese tea types. Grown mainly in Fujian and Taiwan. it has a long history, dating back to the Beisong Dynasty. Besides, White Tea is famous for its beautiful silver-needle-like shape, its sweet taste and its medical effects. The longer it is preserved, the better effect it has. As for its effect, not only is it good for health if drunk frequently, but also it can be used in preventing diseases like high blood pressure as well as helping relieve the pain of toothache and fever.


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